M1 comments:
There is really a lot of research and analysis in the folder however you it has not come into the report and is not cross referenced to support your work. Cross reference your bibliography with your research work. The range of resources needs to be shown ie good internet research but no collation of primary research. Each section needs summarising and bringing into your report.
M2 comments:
You need to add more depth to your report. Use this to help bring everything in your research folder back together. You have made a good start and have got a brief conclusion but the report does not do your research folder justice.
M3 comments:
Evidence of grammar and spell checker have not been shown which is in the mark scheme, also include evidence of proof reading your work. You can also provide more evidence for this when we come to completing the presentation work.
Presentation work:
Present a structured and detailed media production report which conveys information and explains conclusions with clarity.
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