Tuesday, 14 December 2010

Feedback #1

  • More detail required in sections.
  • Why I chose the subject.
  • Describe the energy resource in the planet.
  • Describe why the story is happening the way it is.
  • Describe how Trinity is going to manipulate the factions.
  • Why not use other resources?
  • Why is the uses of these resources so critical?

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