Feedback #1

• More detail required in sections.
• Why I chose the subject.
• Describe the energy resource in the planet.
• Describe why the story is happening the way it is.
• Describe how Trinity is going to manipulate the factions.
• Why not use other resources?
• Why is the uses of these resources so critical?

Xmas holidays

character development: poses and expressions.

Weapon designs. http://www.pimpmygun.com/

Changes

No longer creating a game level, but creating 3D models of the characters and weapons.

Presentation no. 2

• Is it going to work - any problems
• Experiments/trials/examples - concept art?
• Timescale
• Has your FMP altered - why?/to what?

Progress... character previews.

Problems... possible time problems, progress rate at full.

Examples... manga tutorial previews.

Timescale... show timescale.

Altered... no major changes if anything.

To what... unlikely to create a game at the end of it

dialogue link

writing dialogue